Guardian
Character Analysis
What makes a character engaging and compelling is when theirs a lot of small details that the character portrays which captures the audience attention because it makes the audience conjure up questions as to why the characters acts the way he/she does, whats the reason for his gestures, body language. they start to think of explanations for their actions from their own point of view. a un-engaging character is one who's details, body language and thought process, is not clear enough for the audience to understand or not apparent at all which wont keep the audience wanting to understand and gain retention for that particular characters ways.
DEVELOPMENT 1
English boy is sitting in his office going through his documents and emails, whilst simultaneously receiving and sending texts to his friends regarding drinks after work. hes rather distant to the assignments of his current project and focusing much greater on the news he was given by his close-friend Linda. He feels quite alert from his morning boost of espresso to fire up his engines, hes wired, and consciously energetic from both the coffee and the news. His compulsory attire of a pinstripe suit, windsor knot, Hugo boss belt, Just Cavali Slacks and bright red socks which he considers are his ‘Pulling’ socks which he only wears in the interest of going for a drink after work. due to the cold groggy weather he also is wearing a Grey scarf and Jet black trench coat which has been discarded to his coat hanger next to his desk. hes constantly refreshing his emails to see if his important email has come through, he starts to get quite impatient and twitchy which is more defined by the esspresso and release of endorphin because of the news. He mumbles under his breath saying ‘ “c’mon, this could be my lucky break”. he has the radio on to a low volume playing 1980’s tracks because he believes ever since then no good music has been released.
to his excitement the email came through, his eyes light-up like a boy opening his presents on christmas day. He opens the email and his eyes scan the page for important information before reading it thoroughly. He looks satisfied and content, his body language is now more sublte and takes a deep breath which he lets out slowly indicating that must of been a huge load of thoughts he just excreted.
Development 2
Inside the character
Inside his Purse: £80 in notes, a picture of his mother, £9 in loose change, his bank card ( Barclays) His personal card, Drivers licence ( which he hasn't used in 3 years because he doesnt have a car) Starbucks loyalty card, subway loyalty card
Inside his shopping trolley: bread, butter,,milk, vegetables, sci-fi DVD, biscuits, bottled water, instant coffee, hair conditioner, pack of mints,
Inside his briefcase: documents, laptop, personal pen and pad
Character questionnaire
Name: James Cleverley
Nickname: English Boy
His ex-girlfriend gave him the nickname because of his posh accent and she was of american descent. The most noticeable characteristic towards james appearance is the scar on the right side of his temple which came from a rugby injury. he wears his scar as if it was a badge of honor, he feels it gives him more of a “dangerous man” look and he likes to tell the story of how he got it when asked. his voice is slightly deep, Repton school boys accent, he sounds relatively posh, like prince William, yet due to his increasing stay near south London the poshness has been toned down. but he still sounds like a member of the conservative. his most favorite words are bollocks and discombobulated. Bollocks because he likes the way it rolls of the tounge and its versatility to be used in conversations and discombobulate because in his terms sounds ‘Barking schnarking mad’ and when he says it people stare at him funny which often amuses his twisted sense of humor.
He lives in Dulwich, south london. The village is very conservative and safe. there are a lot of Victorian built houses with beautiful old architecture and open fields. it seems like a place where the royal family would come for a walk. the residence is mostly old people in there sixties upwards. he lives in newly built flat right next east Dulwich train station. his flat is very spacious with decor and furniture from Ikea, he favours the colours of black and white for furniture and is very fond of new gadgets, 52 inch screen t.v, games consoles and a apple Imac on his desk with loads of articles surrounding the desk on the walls all written by himself. he feels very proud of his home and keeps it clean at all times because of how he was brought up which was to keep on top of household duties. he previously lived in Shoreditch Hackney but due to the rising rent bills he moved to dulwich. his favourite part of his home is his desk, he loves putting up new articles hes written, cutting them out of the newspaper and framing them if its a headline or sticking it on the wall with bluetack if its a standard article. his collection of articles takes up a 3rd of his wall space. his least favourite place in his home is the kitchen which remains spotless and seemingly unused because he hardly cooks. he feels asif the kitchen belongs to women but hes currently single so hes forced to to spend his precious time preparing meals. james dreams of being in the army, shooting porn scenes, flying and past girlfriends. His mother (Julie Cleverley) 48 and his father (Paul Cleverley) died at the age of 52 from a stroke. he has 2 aunties and 1 uncle all from his mothers side and 7 cousins. hes very close to his mother and keeps contact with her every other day and quite distant from his cousins who of which are mostly younger although he does have 2 older cousins who he hates with a passion. he was close to his father and mourns his death every so often. it hurts him more especially on his birthday March 23rd as his father died on this day whilst he was at work. His parents were relatively wealthy and were considered as upper-class. his ethnic group is Mixed White, his father was mixrace black with descendants from Trinidad and Tobago and his mum is caucasian white. His father was a Catholic but eventually departed from the church as he got older. James is still inlove with his ex girlfriend Mellissa Dunnly. they separated a month after his father died and have kept contact vaguely ever since. he earns around £24,350 per annum with the help from his mother who is sitting on a number of properties and wealth. James loves his job, he believes the job is a 24 hour shift 7 days a week because there always stories and things happening around him which he needs to catch and write up before the day is done. the best part of his job is finding crucial stories and socializing with links towards a certain subject. he believes nothings wrong with this job and sincerely feels completed with this occupation. James fears that he won't find love again or fulfill his ambition of climbing the journalism ladder. if James could change anything in his life it would be his father dying because the two bonded very well and always had banter between them which james is constantly reminded by his mother of where he got his wittiness from.
James is very open sexually, he longed for a career in pornography but because of his
upbringing he did not want to disappoint his beloved mother. he currently has three women on the go and dabbles in sexual activities when he has the time with the nearest or most convienient of the three.Milestone 2 / Character Exercises / Observation
While I was passing by some lingerie stores ahead, a couple in their 30s were sharing a remark about one of the the more outlandish costumes in the shop display; The audible whispers, the leaning in, the shared grin, but only a slight one. Exiting one of the many generic looking fashion stores targeted at teenagers, an older woman was pointing out a girl who just passed by in a faint animal print dress with a sash around her waist, to her younger companion. There was approval in their faces and a mild tinge of something like envy in their backward-angled heads and attentive eyes, about something they wished they could pull off as well as the specimen they had just noticed.
A couple pushing a baby stroller, a stocky man in tan shorts and his petite wife with pulled back hair and a very spa-enhanced face, were offered perfume by the Lebanese salesman manning one of the central stalls on a lower level. After waving him away and walking a few steps, the man looked back and said ‘shukran’ (thank you) with a raised hand, a cultural after-thought. The salesman shouted back ‘affwan’ (welcome) in return, as each party continued with their business.
On our way out of the mall we visited the supermarket. At the checkout, a woman with short dark hair and a knee-length dress suit was conversing quietly on her bright blue phone as she was going through. The attendant bagging her groceries was playing safe by keeping things in separate bags. Still cradling the phone on her shoulder and also handling her wallet, she went up to him, put a stray item he had kept aside into the one large bag already prepared and did a strange rotatory motion with her fore arm, trying to tell him to put everything into one bag, while continuing her conversation on the phone uninterrupted.
While I was passing by some lingerie stores ahead, a couple in their 30s were sharing a remark about one of the the more outlandish costumes in the shop display; The audible whispers, the leaning in, the shared grin, but only a slight one. Exiting one of the many generic looking fashion stores targeted at teenagers, an older woman was pointing out a girl who just passed by in a faint animal print dress with a sash around her waist, to her younger companion. There was approval in their faces and a mild tinge of something like envy in their backward-angled heads and attentive eyes, about something they wished they could pull off as well as the specimen they had just noticed.
A couple pushing a baby stroller, a stocky man in tan shorts and his petite wife with pulled back hair and a very spa-enhanced face, were offered perfume by the Lebanese salesman manning one of the central stalls on a lower level. After waving him away and walking a few steps, the man looked back and said ‘shukran’ (thank you) with a raised hand, a cultural after-thought. The salesman shouted back ‘affwan’ (welcome) in return, as each party continued with their business.
Our mannerisms and the unique body language we develop, one gesture at a time through life, often defines us and the way people see us. We are unaware of these minor quirks but they play an important part in what makes us recognisable to those who know us, a specific gait, a way we hold ourselves up, a habitual body movement. The smallest twitches can make the biggest impact.
On our way out of the mall we visited the supermarket. At the checkout, a woman with short dark hair and a knee-length dress suit was conversing quietly on her bright blue phone as she was going through. The attendant bagging her groceries was playing safe by keeping things in separate bags. Still cradling the phone on her shoulder and also handling her wallet, she went up to him, put a stray item he had kept aside into the one large bag already prepared and did a strange rotatory motion with her fore arm, trying to tell him to put everything into one bag, while continuing her conversation on the phone uninterrupted.
In terms of my character im portraying in the monologue i believe he would be quite direct and takes pride in himself the way he interacts and comes across to friends or strangers. his posture is very upright and focused you would never catch him lounging around in a couch-slouch position in public. He interacts with strangers in a clear and polite manner with a hint of arrogance. If you saw this character walking down the street people would probably get the impression that hes stuck up his own ass and he knows it. He is very observant when interacting, paying attention to fine details that the average person would not even register. his journalism skills always has his eyes on the prowl for the next big article. hes very good at haggling shop staff when needed and can woo the ladies with his strong Repton school accent and vibrant vocabulary that instantly puts them in a trance where by the end of it the staff at whatever shop are eating out his hand. if i could sum him up in three words when in public it would be, manipulative, observant and direct.





